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SOMETHING INTRESTING

Something  interesting to me is how big the galaxy is. Its crazy to think that we thing our galaxy is big but further into the deep darkness there are millions of planets and galaxy's. We only can explore so little but there so much more out there and what I want to know if there is anything out there actually like us. One day we will have the tech and knowledge too know what's out there in the deep big pitch dark place.

Immigrants in our own land

Partners:David, Jose, Uriel

First impression on the story is people want to change but later end up not trying to finish what they set.

Theme: The theme I believe is people make goals but never try to accomplish them.
Tone: Inspirational, Serious , Isolated
Mood: Sad, Depressing, Helpless
Devices: metaphor, oxymoron, Analogy 

Example of devices

Metaphor"-The old men who have lived here stared at us, from deep disturbed eyes, sulking, retreated."

Oxymoron- "Some will die and others will go on living .."

Analogy - "Some will make it out of here with hate in their eyes,

but so very few make it out of here as human ".

My mad dream of a essay

Remember that time you ate that spicy [burrito]just before you went to bed on the night before the big [basjetball game]?  Oh, that weird dream you had about the 2016 presidential election.  When you woke up you couldn't quite remember the [retarted] details, but after            reading "On Self-Reliance" and "A Sound of Thunder" it's all coming back to you now.

The dream started badly.  You were in line with your family at a [zoo] waiting to be sent to Be in [The gorilla happitap].  Everywhere  you looked there were posters of president-elect [idiot trump], looking like a crazy [orange bam boo ass] who could eat a whole [piece of shit].   

Suddenly, there was Ralph Waldo Emerson telling you, "[ Man is his own star ]."  You realized that you have something to contribute to the world so you decided to [fart].  But it wasn't easy.  First you had to put on a fancy [hat] and [shoes] and then you had make a [beat drop] to go back in time to the [mall] so you could convince people to learn about the candidates and that [Trump is a idiot of a president].

But right there in the [mall] there was a giant [trump] and it started [scream] ing at everyone.  People started to [run].  You grabbed a [water gun] from a nearby [toy store] and yelled [fuk off trump].  Everyone stopped and listened, so you kept going.

We all make mistakes in our life, but what we do in the present will effect what happens in the future. I've made mistakes that have affect my life, my sophomore I didn't give a crap about anything all I wanted to do was go home and lay down and from that I got bad grades and I wont be able to get into a really good college unless I work extra harder the rest of high school. A other example is in "Sound of thunder" When Eckels went to the past and stepped on a butterfly and came back to the present and changed everything. A other example is in "self-relicense" when Emerson was explaining that a simple understanding of who someone really was and would change there future from that explanation. All are thinking and our actions create our individual sense of self and the society we all share is caused by our actions because of what we do makes us who we are and makes a road for what we will be doing.

Inciting incident

"He turned back on a side street, circling around toward his home. He was within a block of his destination when the lone car turned a corner quite suddenly and flashed a fierce white cone of light upon him. He stood entranced, not unlike a night moth, stunned by the illumination, and then drawn toward it.
A metallic voice called to him:
'Stand still. Stay where you are! Don't move!'
He halted.
'Put up your hands!'
'But-' he said.
'Your hands up! Or we'll shoot!'"-The PedestrianBy Ray Bradbury
This the rising action of the story because some unknown car drove by where he was heading and made it seem like he was about to have a bad time. Also were he tries to recreate the scene of when he go arrested into a  more devious way.

President mistake

Well well....well Trump made a fool of himself in the debate Hilary didn't even try that hard to destroy him with his flaws. Especially during the first round which she pulled a 92% overall compared to Trump with his 8% percent. The fact that Trump used to much Ad Hominen to part from the main question.

An earth shattering fart

My honest review on this story was what the hell? So something so small may have a huge impact on your future. They did foreshadow that not to touch anything out of the ordinary and Eckels, changed the very future he wasn't intending to. HE was killed by Travis at the end of the story because of such a small mistake. But I believe the main message is not to mess with the past cause it will affect your future.